Minggu, 15 April 2012

SWAN STORY


This story was inspired from the song titled stars are blind by paris hiton

               Girl named Swan, is a jovial person, rather lebay, intelligent, and have many friends. She school in brian senior high school. In the new academic year, she also got a new classmate who comes from another class, there are cool, there are calm, there are uproar, and many more.

When cleaning the classroom, Swan accidentally dropped a place marker. And while she will take a marker, there is a man who helped her, his named was Greyson. On that day she realized that there is someone who is different and can interesting Swan attention. From there she began to have more curiosity about Greyson.

               Greyson unexpected too. After several days of friends, Swan began to suspect other Greyson purpose approached her. But, in this case Greyson too careful, so it is difficult to predict. As time went on they got closer and get to know one another. With enough close friendship and intensity to meet very often plus coupled with a good character Greyson, gentle, and patient. There is a sense of love to Greyson and she realizes Greyson is a man that her search. Their closeness has made  Swan close the door of her heart for others, its happened because Greyson understand who the real Swan

               October 24th was Swan birthday, Greyson gave a very romantic gift, a song that sung with a guitar and a Swan favorite book with fresh rose bouquet. Swan was very surprised and delighted to receive these gifts, and began to think that on that day, Greyson also would declare his love for Swan. But what is considered by Swan did not happen. Swan was not disappointed with this fact, it may Greyson still needs time to prepare himself.

               After the birthday party is complete, Swan heard a bad news from a Greyson friend. Greyson into a coma, and now treated in the ER. Without thinking, Swan immediately went to the hospital where Greyson is being treated. After that she was surprised to see Greyson and was silent, she did not believe that a man who was lying weak it is Greyson, from there she knew that Greyson is suffering heart disease. And according to the doctor calculation, Greyson age was not long.

               After knowing this, Swan trying to find ways to Greyson disease can be cured, but in fact nothing could cure the Greyson disease, unless a miracle. Swan has always prayed for a miracle that came to him and in quick time.
After several days of treatment, Greyson showed progress quite rapidly, even he was able to talk back. This opportunity is not wasted by Swan to express her feelings to Greyson, Greyson was happy but also sad, because he was afraid if Swan will be very sad if he was dead. With really heavy heart, Greyson jilt Swan. Swan did not give up easily, she tried to convince Greyson that she would be fine. After his mother was supported by Greyson on Swan finally accepted love. No doubt they are both very excited. 

On the next day there was an unexpected situation, Greyson was deteriorated . And must get treatment from the doctor. Fate has acted, the doctors had to exert all the ability to save Greyson, and every effort has been made, but all to no avail. Greyson no longer able to survive and he left Swan, family, and friends forever.

Rabu, 25 Januari 2012

text analysis for spoof text 2

Orientation       : james and john are lunatic asylum occupant and they got into the same cell.
Event                 : John jumped into the pool eventhough he cant swim, and then James followed                               to save him.
Twist                  : James hung  John to dry him up

SPOOF TEXT 2


                James and john are lunatic asylum occupant. They went to lunatic asylum in the same time so they get to the same cell. And that's why they're becoming best friend. 
                At a free time, they were having a engrossing conversation beside the pool. It was pretty hot that day.  Seeing their friend swimming. Cursory, John would go for a swim too. But he forgot that he cant swim. Without a second thought, he jumped into the pool. James followed john to jump to save his best friend. 
                After listened to that story from the nurse, the doctor who handle both of them thinks he have to send james down.  Because, james' psychological condition has improved and getting back to the society is a good option. 
When Doctor called james and asked, 
Doctor                 : The nurse said that you saved John
James                   : Yes, I did  
Doctor                 : And where's john? 
James pulled doctor's sleeve to the yard  and says, "I hang john so he can quickly dry" 

Text analysis for breakfast text
       Orientation
                Mom is having her birthday, and her sons obeyed her to not to get out of bed
       Event
                The sons are making their breakfast in the kitchen
       Twist
                The sons are not making the breakfast for their mom, while mom’s thinking the opposite way